28 lands is too much

I like the deck, but it is not consistent enough. I would make more three-of's instead of having so many one and two-of's.

Ya that's actually what I'm trying to figure out now. I just put all the cards I like on here as one ofs but I'm trying to figure out which ones I should do 2 or 3 ofs

i would suggest some temples Temple of Malady ,Temple of Silence ,Temple of Plenty . those pain lands really hurt when you cant tap them for colorless

There is a lot of life gain in the deck though. I want to playtest because I would much rather have land that comes in untapped, just not sure