I want this to be my Boros themed concept deck.
My goal is to make it worthy of winning standard FNMs throughout the Theros block while remaining true to it's storyline concept. Advice, comments and PLUS +1 votes much appreciated.
second draft for write up with no knowledge of Wizards true concept or storyline regarding MTG:
In the skies above the Temple of Triumph the air crackles with red lightening; the people of Akros are gathered together in their masses to witness the spectacle. The clouds are split asunder and a tremendous roaring in the heavens heralds the arrival of something miraculous. While this is certainly no hum-drum everyday occurrence, the Akronians are not panicked by the tumult in the air above their heads. In Theros, The God's play their game at the expense of mortal men and women and only the strong and fearless survive.
A figure emerges out of the writhing chaos and descends upon the city.
The Akronian Crusaders led by their seasoned Phalanx Leaders form ranks and prepare to meet the descending stranger. They draw naked steel in unison, singing a song of swords to greet their enemy."HOLD!"
Anax and Cymede stand together at the forefront of the common folk gathered at the temple."Are you sure about this my love? Not all divine powers are benevolent." Taking her husbands arm, there is no fear in Cymede's eyes.
"I have felt this coming, wife." Anax stares up at approaching visitor in rapture. "This is our destiny."
"There is no threat here brothers and sisters! Be at ease and stay your arms! This is no enemy we see now before us"
A light shockwave kicks up a wave of dust as Aurelia, the Warleader comes to a abrupt and graceful landing before the people in the temple square.
"I'm afraid that only part of what you say is true," the divine voice reverberates supremely, "I indeed am not your enemy. However, the threats to your immortal souls abound." The angel's blood red gaze pierces the hearts of those who would meet her gaze. "Holy mother Avacyn, Angel of Hope and her blessed sisters can no longer aide us. It has fallen upon me to venture to this plane of Theros and cleanse it with righteous fury. The Boros Legion of Ravnica have come through and the cosmic veil to brace the good people of Akros against damnation by the dark powers of death and deciet. Your lands are rife with savages and heretics. I stand before you ready to face the possibility of oblivion, but I will not stand idly by while this world; your home, is corrupted. Will you join with me and my allies? This moment will be the dawn of our age of Martial Glory. What say you mortals?"
Let the fiery fury of Our Heavenly Maiden inspire our righteous citizens of Akros to heroic deeds, so that they may secure our salvation and be remembered in legends for ages to come."""
