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Commander / EDH* NoviceMagician

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Casey4321 says... #1

July 6, 2015 8:13 p.m.

Trockenmatt says... #2

SirFowler, as I said, just make the +1 a +2.

July 6, 2015 8:19 p.m.

SirFowler says... #3

All right then Trockenmatt.

As for Casey4321's card, I like it, but if you read any of the previous posts I've posted, I am a nitpicker. Sorry in advance because I have OCD and I just like to have things correct.

  1. Change the "non-token" into "nontoken". There isn't supposed to be a dash. Check Abzan Ascendancy for a reference.

  2. Change "spirit" into "Spirit". Creature names are always capitalized.

Other than that, I really like it, well done.

July 6, 2015 8:28 p.m.

Casey4321 says... #4

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There ya go.

July 6, 2015 8:45 p.m.

SirFowler says... #5

How's this?

July 6, 2015 8:47 p.m.

SirFowler says... #6

That's fine. I did notice something else, but I'm just going to restrain myself, even though it's killing me.

July 6, 2015 8:48 p.m.

NoviceMagician says... #7

Hot beans, thanks for he image Casey4321. Work on your deck list whenever you get the chance, no need to rush though. :)

Why do I keep disappearing? Pfft, it isn't because I'm watching anime. I'm definitely watching anime.

July 6, 2015 8:50 p.m.

Casey4321 says... #8

Oh fudge. Commas.

July 6, 2015 8:51 p.m.

SirFowler says... #9

And a period after "2 life" from the first ability.

July 6, 2015 8:56 p.m.

Casey4321 says... #10

Edited for vocabulary.

July 6, 2015 9:02 p.m.

SirFowler says... #11

Crap.....missing comma.....after..."nontoken white creature" in second ability....

Sorry, I just had to say something.

July 6, 2015 9:06 p.m.

Casey4321 says... #12

July 6, 2015 9:09 p.m.

SirFowler says... #13

There, now it's perfect. Sorry for nitpicking so much, but one of the reasons is because if the people are willing to change the card so many times, that means that put their heart and soul into it, making for such a better experience when playing knowing that you put so much time and effort into the commander. Once that's done, you have a weight off your shoulders cough cough me cough cough and you feel a whole lot better.

The other reason, well, the OCD thing and all.

Edit: Check the name. Is it suppose to be Mounsong or Mournsong?

....sorry :(

July 6, 2015 9:21 p.m. Edited.

Casey4321 says... #14

It's alright man! No need to apologize! Thank you for noticing and keeping me on my toes. Novice: Final edits I think lol

July 6, 2015 9:31 p.m.

SirFowler says... #15

I think technically is before in mana costs, but I could be wrong. Check Cartel Aristocrat for reference.

Edit: If you used Magic Set Editor, you could edit very easily with very little effort.

July 6, 2015 9:37 p.m. Edited.

Casey4321 says... #16

I'VE NEVER NOTICED THAT BEFORE. MIND BLOWN On literally every BW card it goes WB...Wow. Hm. Well in that case I think I'll take a pass on changing it. FIGHT THE SYSTEM lol

July 6, 2015 9:41 p.m.

SirFowler says... #17

That part doesn't matter as much since the color identities have change over the years, like the change from The Mimeoplasm to Sidisi, Brood Tyrant color switch.

July 6, 2015 9:45 p.m.

JA14732 says... #18

It's always the first color in the color pie going clockwise, then in clockwise order to result in the shortest possible travel. Ergo for Naya (Godsire), for Simic (Bounding Krasis), etc. Tarkir Khans are unique, being instead composed of the primary color for the wedge ( for Abzan, for Jeskai, etc.) followed by the opposing color and then the primary color's ally counterclockwise. It's a bit easier to visualize: Abzan is (Siege Rhino). For all other representations of the wedges, the clockwise rule applies, i.e. for Junk (Doran, the Siege Tower).

July 6, 2015 9:49 p.m. Edited.

Casey4321 says... #19

Learn something new every day.

July 6, 2015 9:56 p.m.

Huh, good stuff.

July 6, 2015 10:52 p.m.

Raze999 says... #21

Can we do playtesting matches before the actual tournament or would everyone rather wait until the real thing?

July 6, 2015 11:04 p.m.

SirFowler says... #22

I feel like everyone should enable chat with each player in the tournament so it would be easier to communicate. That way, we could also plan testing real time and suggest some changes if needed.

July 6, 2015 11:07 p.m.

Chat is up to you all to figure out. You can use Skype, the chat on untap.in, IRC, T/O pm, or anything else you so desire.

July 6, 2015 11:20 p.m.

Trockenmatt says... #24

If you guys want, my Skype is Trockenmatt

July 6, 2015 11:37 p.m.

Casey4321 says... #25

Just finished my first draft. Feels good.

July 6, 2015 11:49 p.m.

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