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Raze999 says... #1

At 6 mana removal all it takes to shut him down i feel

July 2, 2015 1:06 a.m.

NoviceMagician says... #2

In reply to post #80

Or that

July 2, 2015 1:09 a.m.

SirFowler says... #3

That might work. Also, again I'm nitpicking, but you need to add a comma after 'combat'. Other than that, I feel like it works.

July 2, 2015 1:13 a.m.

Raze999 says... #4

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July 2, 2015 1:14 a.m.

Raze999 says... #5

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July 2, 2015 1:17 a.m.

SirFowler says... #6

I hate OCD so much. It has hindered my ability to see the world world as it is rather than just trying to fix everything. sigh

The comma is misplaced. D:

Edit: Disregard this comment. I got ninja'd XD

July 2, 2015 1:17 a.m. Edited.

Raze999 says... #7

Final form agreed upon?

July 2, 2015 1:17 a.m.

SirFowler says... #8

looks it over

Check. Looks good on my end. Novice?

July 2, 2015 1:20 a.m.

Daedalus19876 says... #9

Templating still looks odd, seems like it should be written something like this:

Haste

Creatures you control get +1/-1.

At the beginning of each player's combat phase, they choose one of their opponents at random. Creatures they control attack the chosen opponent during that combat if able.

But its costing is better now. And it lost that odd self-recursion ability. It might also be interesting at 1WBR with +2/-2 and as a 4/3 or 5/2, compared to Zurgo Helmsmasher and Ruhan of the Fomori for reference.

July 2, 2015 1:25 a.m.

Raze999 says... #10

I have a second commander im working on if anyones interested

July 2, 2015 1:35 a.m.

SirFowler says... #11

@Daedalus19876 Your wording sounds even more confusing. On Ruhan, it doesn't actually say combat phase, only combat. Combat phase is only referred to when you add phases or when you skip phases, such as Aggravated Assault or Stonehorn Dignitary.

July 2, 2015 1:35 a.m.

SirFowler says... #12

How's this for the wording of Khudul?

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Haste

Other creatures you control get +1/-1.

Each player has "At the beginning of combat on your turn, choose an opponent at random. Each creature you control attacks that player if able."

5/4

Thoughts? Cause the way it was worded, Khudul would have been a 6/3 for 5 mana and haste. As for the secondary effect, I basically copied Ruhan of the Fomori's text word for word, up until the each creature part.

July 2, 2015 2:16 a.m.

Daedalus19876 says... #13

That's pretty clear, actually. Odd to have the "Each opponent has", but it actually works decently well. I think that either of our wordings would have worked, though.

July 2, 2015 2:24 a.m.

6tennis says... #14

Khudul looks good. Elf person from before looks flippin' busted in half.

July 2, 2015 2:41 a.m.

Don't know how to put images into comments so I'll post the text here. It's not complicated.

Farekh, Manipulator Mage ()

Legendary Creature - Human Wizard

At the beginning of your upkeep, proliferate.

, : Proliferate.

2/4

@NoviceMagician

July 2, 2015 7:49 a.m.

JA14732 says... #16

6tennis, you're the first person I've seen who dislikes Tymdall. Care to explain?

Also, Farekh seems quite strong. Profilerate is already strong, and with access to Doubling Season and Ral Zarek, and strongest infect cards, it feels like the deck could be extremely strong and almost OP. Maybe edit the upkeep ability a bit?

July 2, 2015 9:02 a.m.

Daedalus19876 says... #17

The proliferate general is WAY strong, because I've already playe against a proliferate deck in EDH.

I'd be fine with it, honestly, if we knew Magistrate's Scepter wasn't in the deck. Too easy to break in half :P

July 2, 2015 9:29 a.m.

Maybe something like:

At the beginning of your upkeep, choose up to three creatures you control. Proliferate those creatures.

Or something like that? So it can't be used in artifact shenanigans like Magistrate's Scepter?

July 2, 2015 10:50 a.m.

JA14732 says... #19

Only problem is that you can't use the profilerate ability word with that ability, due to the way proliferaye works. Try: at the beginning of your upkeep, choose up to three target creatures. For each type of counter on those crestures, you may add an additional counter of that type.

July 2, 2015 10:55 a.m.

Now can you explain how to embed an image in a comment? No one's told me yet D:

July 2, 2015 10:57 a.m.

JA14732 says... #21

There's a button. It looks like a mountain with a sun beside it, just add the image URL and you should be fine.

July 2, 2015 11 a.m.

Alright, I got a (bad) night of sleep, but I'm here now.clet's go over what I missed shall we?

@Raze999, should say "other creatures you control get +1/-1." Other than that, seems fine to me. You can change the wording if you want to, but I understand just fine how it is, so changing the wording is up to you.

@canterlotguardian, sorry, but that guy is way too strong. Having the activated profilerate seems less broken, but cost should go up by 1. The automatic upkeep profilerate needs to go though, perhaps something like, "choose up to three creatures you control with a counter on them, then put another counter on them of a kind already there." Other people will probably have to help with the wording on that a bit. Also, for inserting images, you can also do this:

<img src="IMAGE URL GOES HERE">

@6tennis, why?

@SirFowler, I'll link this page on my profile page.

@Daedalus19876, I'm about to make the commander panel.

@JA14732, because I didn't want to leave anyone out of this post.

@Magicrafter, same reason.

Alright everyone, that all being said: Could I have the url to each of your commanders? The picture that is.

EDIT- Totally didn't forget to tag you KalvinHobbez. XD

July 2, 2015 11:45 a.m. Edited.

HolyFalcon says... #23

Creature side: http://i.gyazo.com/75ec1b01567d9cf79739dfdbe03a4bf2.png

PW Side: http://i.gyazo.com/26c2eb47126248717d0892b9b6120135.png

July 2, 2015 12:02 p.m.

Raze999 says... #24

I fixed that other creatures thing on khudul thanks, i also have a second commander if anyone would like to see or try it

July 2, 2015 12:05 p.m.

Go ahead and post it Raze999, and thanks Magicrafter

July 2, 2015 12:13 p.m.

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