@Daedalus The second ability on Shiva should be "Untap that creature. It gains haste until the end of turn." See Act of Treason for reference.
One more thing. Sorry, but your commander just doesn't seem on flavor. The first ability is primarily blue (Crippling Chill), the second is primarily red (Act of Treason), and the third is either blue or white (Propaganda, Norn's Annex). It just doesn't really fit with your commander's mono-white theme, you know?
Edit: I think I just might be nitpicking here. If you guys are getting tired of my corrections, please let me know. I really don't want to be that guy, but that's just the way I am.
July 2, 2015 2:36 p.m. Edited.
Going to agree with SirFowler. I understand the music inspiration, but Shiva's just not white outside of her ultimate.
July 2, 2015 2:43 p.m.
And lastly. If Shiva transforms, you don't need a mana cost for the planeswalker side. I would just remove that completely.
July 2, 2015 2:46 p.m.
You all make very fine points. Perhaps I should make her dual-colored. In hindsight, making her dual-colored would actually balance her out a bit. It would also give me a few more toys to play with. Maybe ? has Beguiler of Wills and friends.
July 2, 2015 2:54 p.m.
That would be fine with me. How does everyone else feel on this?
July 2, 2015 3:01 p.m.
That works. Blue is secondary in creature theft. OR make the transformed side blue. Same effect, but allows you to keep her creature side white.
July 2, 2015 3:35 p.m.
Do you guys think i should use Khudul or Ghojhiru ad my commander? I think im leaning towards Khudul
July 2, 2015 3:43 p.m.
NoviceMagician says... #9
@6tennis, the link you gave me for the creature side was the first version, the one we decided against. It should say "activate this ability only on your turn" and the CMC be 3. If you'd like to make it dual colored, that's fine.
@Raze999, Khudul seems like more fun, I'd play him.
@canterlotguardian, let me know when you have the final version, because I have no idea if the last one was final or not.
July 2, 2015 4:32 p.m.
Trockenmatt says... #10
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/krenko-undead-boss#.VZWnp_lVhHw
My possible Commander
July 2, 2015 5:06 p.m.
Daedalus19876 says... #11
SirFowler, NoviceMagician, 6tennis: Hopefully for the last time, here is Shiva's final form.
Creature: http://i.imgur.com/cz56n5f.jpg
Planeswalker: http://i.imgur.com/5oRCRE9.jpg
Everyone okay with that?
July 2, 2015 5:19 p.m.
@Trockenmatt I like it. The only thing is there are currently no 1/1 black Zombie token creatures out there, unless I'm mistaken.
July 2, 2015 5:22 p.m.
Daedalus19876 says... #13
Trockenmatt: seems...a little uncreative, to be totally honest. But it's certainly not broken; actually, it's probably a little less powerful than Krenko as is.
But Zombie tokens should be, whenever possible, 2/2. Maybe "X 2/2 Zombie tokens, where X is half of the number of Zombies you control, rounded up"?
July 2, 2015 5:23 p.m.
Trockenmatt says... #15
Daedalus19876, that would definitely make it easier, sure.
Here it is!
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/krenko-undead-boss-1#.VZWuEflVhHw
July 2, 2015 5:29 p.m. Edited.
NoviceMagician says... #17
@Daedalus19876, yeah, that is acceptable. Thanks for creating them and giving me the url. Well 6tennis, the forms of your commander that Daedalus posted are accepted, work on your decklist whenever you get the chance.
@Trockenmatt, welcome, it's good to have ya. :) I think the commander is fine, if you wanted to, you can go to 2/1 and make the cost for him 5, up to you.
July 2, 2015 5:39 p.m.
NoviceMagician says... #19
Alright, we are now at 9 participants, with 7 spots left. Work on your decklist when you get the chance Trockenmatt.
EDIT- Once Raze999 decides if he is using Khudul or the other one, and I know what canterlotguardian's final card looks like, I'll clear e comments which are getting realllly long.
July 2, 2015 5:44 p.m. Edited.
canterlotguardian says... #20
@NoviceMagician the image I linked is my final version of the card, pending your approval.
July 2, 2015 5:46 p.m.
NoviceMagician says... #21
Oh, alright, then it is accepted canterlotguardian. If you don't mind, I'd like the url to it.
July 2, 2015 5:48 p.m.
Here's the url for Tymdall: http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/complete/full/2015/7/1/1435802370975336.png
July 2, 2015 5:58 p.m.
canterlotguardian says... #23
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k13/turbanboy4/farekh_zpscvehhfr4.png
I made it myself on MSE and uploaded it to my Photobucket account.
July 2, 2015 6:01 p.m.
@NoviceMagician You have my URL link right?
@canterlotguardian First off, you need to add the artist at the bottom. Second, switch to Style on MSE before snapshotting it. Third, remove the dash in between "non-artifact", so it looks like "nonartifact".
SirFowler says... #1
@canterlotguardian That Farekh you made looks badass. What did you search to get that image?
Edit: @Daedalus19876 You might also want to add the symbol instead of just 2. The way it looks, it's hard to tell if we have to pay 2 life or tap 2 mana.
July 2, 2015 2:25 p.m. Edited.