StoryArcher,
First, the deck looks really fun. A few thoughts though, in no particular order:

• Land Destruction is not a wincon. If it's working for you, that's awesome. But I worry that 1x Thrun, 1x Nissa, and 1x Strombreath may not be enough to actually close out the game.
• Your mana- and dork-base would benefit a little from -3x Forest, -1x Birds of Paradise, +3x Green Fetchlands (Windswept Heath are the least expensive, but any of them are fine). Because the Fetches allow us to grab Stomping Ground as well, they give us a slightly better chance of getting the 2R we need to cast Blood Moon on Turn 2, which would allow you to drop a Bird for something better in the late game. Here's a piece on our Ponza Mana Simulator if you'd like to play with the numbers yourself.
• I like Ancient Grudge better than Artifact sweepers, personally. But if your meta demands sweepers, Shatterstorm is strictly better than Creeping Corrosion.
• Unless your meta is just overrun with Tron and Titanshift, 4x Crumble to Dust may be excessive. Surgical Extraction is another similar(ish) option, which is great in other match-ups as well.

Also, I TOTALLY get the desire to make a deck competitive "without necessarily carbon copying someone else's card list", but I always recommend starting with other lists and then tweaking (sometimes drastically) to fit our meta and playstyle. If you haven't already, I'd strongly recommend looking at these:

• The Eternal Witness + Primal Command softlock is GREAT, especially with Stampeding Wildebeests/Stampeding Serow. But the Serow has seen play in exactly one Competitive Modern deck, so I'd give that a hard look for sure.
• This one and this one are very different than yours, but probably worth a look.
• And FWIW, here's the Primal Command deck I ran for a while: Primal Ponza.

Good luck (and good skill) with the deck!

StoryArcher,
Sorry for the double-post, but I forgot to mention: Michael Neilson did a Q&A on his Stampeding Serow deck over here.

clayperce, Never apologize for offering helpful insight.

I've been playing around with a version of that deck myself (located here - Mono-Green Control) and I'd appreciate any insights you might have to share. I'm still leaning pretty hard towards Gruul, but you can't argue with results and I tend to much prefer both mono-green and fringe deck types.

As I look at cards like Inferno Titan and Walking Ballista, I'm considering replacing Serow/Wildebeests with Roaring Primadox so that I'm not limited to bouncing green creatures, should that come up.

If you play Tireless Tracker, you should run more fetchlands, great synergy

puroki, Generally that might be true, but in this particular instance Blood Moon renders fetch lands no different than basic lands and I tend to want to get that out as soon as possible - in addition to that, I need Forests a lot more than I need Mountains, so I'm pushing it a little as it is. As an interesting aside, once when I noticed that I had three fetch lands and two Trackers in play with a Blood Moon, I used Primal Command to bounce Blood Moon back to the top of my deck and then sacked all the land to Investigate six times. I then used a Clue token to draw back the Moon and played it again.