You say you could use some enchantments which give board control.

try these maybe1X Arrest1X Dissapation Field1X Teferi's Moat1X Sphere of Safety

How about these:1X Legacy's Allure 1X Upheaval 1X Seal of Cleansing 1X Voyager Staff 1X Crystal Shard

Blinkmoth Urn Ghostway Chromatic Lantern Sol Ring Deadeye Navigator Ghostly Flicker Mulldrifter Wall of Reverence

Sakashima the Impostor Ink-Eyes, Servant of Oni lacking black cards it seems,maybe think about a Chainer's Edict Doomblade Okiba-Gang Shinobi

Are you talking to yourself?

yeah, it's all good though im giving myself some good advice

Fair enough, one thing this deck is really lacking (besides the necessary amount of cards to reach the required 100 for this format) is SYNERGY.

Really just look at your commander.... What does he do for this deck at all? Sacrifice a blocked to prevent your opponent from screwing you even harder than they are for a turn?

Even that situation is far fetched.

You need to seriously reconsider the card choices in here if you're goin to continue using the general you are.... Which I advise you not to.

I personally would suggest a general change to Dromar, the Banisher . You don't need to abandon the artifact theme you're going for here but I feel he'd function much better than ertai, or even sharuum in this current build

Oh yeah and your mana base is pretty shit. Sol Ring an Command Tower will help. Glimmervoid is decent as well

I have not accounted for all the lands that i actually have in this deck, i feel there is too many good cards and not enough ability to have them work together. What cards would you think could help this? also i like Dromar, the Banisher here hence the name change... Helvault is another addition i am considering. I really could use some enchantments which can protect my board. Teferi's Moat

after playing a match tonight i was able to win, using the combination of Darksteel Forge , Mycosynth Lattice and Platinum Emperion as well as Venser, the Sojourner

Might need some more card draw, my hand was really limited the entire game Ponder Concentrate Mind's Eye

Spine of Ish Sah combined with Venser, the Sojourner and Venser, Shaper Savant is pretty ridiculous. This artifact is quite costly, consider this. A good card to slow opponent aggression is Norn's Annex .

Shifting Sky +Teferi's Moat = stall

I find Executioner's Capsule and Dispeller's Capsule to be really useful, they're cheap and recurrable from your graveyard using Sharuum.

also Sen Triplets and Conjurer's Closet would be god-tier in this build

thanks for looking at my deck I am a real big on mana rocks like Basalt Monolith and Doubling Cube with the Unwinding Clock I do not understand what your doing with your Creature good deck thou I like it

i would say Thran Dynamo and Temple of Deceit

match review: 1/22/14 . I won in 3 player edh. You know what, i'm tired of people disrespecting Draco , so i copied my opponents Avacyn, Angel of Hope and equipped Sword of Kaldra to Draco . Who is laughing now!!!