i kinda have a deck similar but i didnt go for the wedge like you did. i stuck to the R/G. If your going wedge i would highly recommend Haven of the Spirit Dragon at least a 2 of this way it doesn't matter if you don't hit your basic lands. as for Crater's Claws if you have a devotion then it can become insane, other wise your going to have to tap all out to possibly kill something on their side.. i would say -2 to add in Draconic Roar doing 3 to a creature then 3 to the opponent is huge since your going all in on dragons. or maybe think of a Command you might want to use. Atarka's Command or Kolaghan's Command

heres what i did: http://tappedout.net/mtg-decks/green-red-dragons-dkt/

-1 Sarkhan, the Dragonspeaker and +1 Sarkhan Unbroken. He is a lie- his ulti is broken. As many dragons as you want will deal 241 damage with this deck if not blocked, and you can attack each turn.

I know I said this already, but you seem to have disregarded what I said. Dude, you NEED TO REPLACE the Dragonlord's Servant with some other ramp card(s). It's REALLY bad, even in dragon decks.

Sorry for the delay on comment responses. Here y'all go:
Scorprix I'm definitely starting to see what you mean in more matchups. I always tend to find other ramp cards much more helpful, so I'll definitely cut some Dragonlord's Servant. In terms of Fearsome Awakening, it actually comes in handy, especially with hasty creatures that can come in for the win.
tsnydes28 Haven of the Spirit Dragon is definitely going in (thanks to others for recommending as well) and Draconic Roar could replace some other removal.
buttergolem I'll try some testing with Sarkhan Unbroken and see how well he fits in.

addUtvara Hellkite or Dragonspeaker Shaman

and. there is no ore! this is mtg we're talking about.

I think you should take a look at my deck that is very similar I just got top eight with it yesterday. It's very nice. And you may get some ideas from it.

The deck is good I plan on playing it on FNM. But may I suggest to add a bit more forests?

Sure, suggestions are always welcome! What problems have you been running into exactly?

How about Whip of Erebos instead of Fearsome Awakening?

You have 3 Thunderbreak Regent MB and 2 SB, can't have more than 4 mate.

Whoops, my bad just made some quick edits, thanks for the catch!

Okay soI played it today at FNM. Deck is slow... I expected that. But you might want to uhh... Get a bit more kill spells? And some spells that can get you what you want. Like a Chord of Calling.Also take it easy on land... I'm getting a load of land. Well I'll be playing every FNM every now and then. Try to take it easy on the land please... And a bit more kill spells.

Alright, thank you for your feedback!

So when do you plan on updating the deck? Because the deck works good, but try to add just a few more kill spells... Like Bile Blight. And add some of the scry lands.