Your lands could certainly use some work.

Woodland Cemetery , Sunpetal Grove , and Isolated Chapel would be good places to start. Utility lands in EDH are usually the determining factor in deciding the winner of stalled-out games. Mystifying Maze , Vault of the Archangel , and Grim Backwoods are all good cards in EDH for obvious reasons.

Also, definitely get your hands on a Primeval Titan . You're really only hurting yourself by not playing with one in here.

the lands are not on my to get list. primeval titan is jsut a mana ramp when i can pull a turn 3 teneb. i am jsut on a hunt for cards on sideboard and i just get cards from friends and packs. no card store.

But if you had better lands to fetch out (like utility lands... speaking of which, why don't you have Cabal Coffers in here? Fail.), then Primeval Titan is terrific value.

Not living near a card store is no excuse when you have the internet to buy things from.

unless you have no credit card. and an extreme budget with gas

Fair enough. But you might put a fat disclaimer on your deck's description that says "I want suggestions, but unless that suggestion is on my Maybeboard, I'll just say no. And if it is, I'll just say 'That's already on my Maybeboard.'"

That way, nobody else will waste time here.

long story short if i can pull it out of a pack, i can get it at a low rate. i always get cards for the other 3 decks that are doing better with some utility lands than teneb. Sin Triplets is where my best deck is at the moment is. it is always that deck that gets the goodies

Hi there!

1) Your manabase is really poor, try working on it and add multicolor nonbasics

2) You are running green, try to drop artifact mana fixers for green mana search, it's better(but t-up for Darksteel Ingot , it's indestructible)

3) I don't know how metagame in your playgroup looks, but don't you have problem with graveyard hate, since you run so much boardsweepers and only few creatures?

4) When thinking about cards in deck, ask yourself "Do I really need/put in good use this card?"

5) Here is link to my GBW deck for inspiration, it's my most competetive deck with little need for further investment : deck:bgw-reanimator-highlander

PS: work on your grammar =)

in the current state it is in, this deck in multiplayer won against a jahora and a kard edh. it is slow but with some combos, i can pull off a 5 turn win. i am currently waiting for the confermation or decomphermation of the banning of Primeval Titan . i heard it was banned but it was heard it was not. if the rumors are true, no prime time but if it is false, hello pain. also i am trying to get graveborn to get Entomb and Reanimate . i am on a budget and gas is expensive so i cannot go to magic. RTR is going to be great with Grave Betrayal .