nice little story

Thanks, I appreciate that :)

your sideboard should have something for vs enchantments, and Colossus of Akros just doesn't feel like a good sideboard card. Back to Nature works, or if courser is too important to you for that you could use some targeted enchantment destroy.

in general make sure your sideboard has cards with specific purposes. it looks kind of like you're just running things that didn't fit maindeck (I could be wrong, but with Karametra's Acolyte and the colossus I can't imagine where the match that they're great is. as I said, something vs. enchantments, maybe something to turn off Supreme Verdict , though I don't know if anything in green does indestructible at instant speed in standard.

Thanks heaps asasinater13 for your comment. You are right with Karametra's Acolyte , and possibly with the colossus. Thanks for all your help, and any other suggestions would be great! -may you walk the monsters path for all eternity-

I could see Hunt the Hunter in sideboard as a removal spell. does great things against the mirror match, where you would just have to race. hunt lets you get rid of creatures without having to trade, and attack in the same turn.

Cool looking deck...with all the ramp you have available do you think that Colossus of Akros could be a thing in your deck? +1

Thanks for the comment yad I really appreciate that :) and that does sound like a good idea, however, I can't decide what to take out in sideboard/mainboard to fit in cards like that. It would be a brilliant help if you could find a card to take out that might not be helping the deck. Thanks :)

Love the story u made! When I have more time I'll try to find something to add to your story! +1 from me!

Thanks so much The_Red_Weird. It would be super awesome if you could help with the story. Thanks for the upvote as well. :)

Alright, so I was thinking maybe Erebos and Aethreos raised Elspeth from the dead to gather an army of humans (B/W humans is a huge part of the meta at my FNM) to defeat the pesky red and green revelers that follow Xenagos. When the threat of the revelers was gone nothing would stop the forces of black (with the assistance of white) from ruling the plane of Theros! Polukranos would march his new army across Theros until he found the dwelling place of Elspeth, which was he city Aethreos. Elspeth explains how and why she was raised from the dead and sends her army to do battle against the army of Polukranos, to finish the forces of the red and green revelers. She went after Xenagos and Polukranos herself. She easily knocks Polukranos unconscious using her Planeswalker magic. After seeing his brother defeated, Xenagos goes intoo a rage so great that he is launched into godhood. With his newfound power, Xenagos obliterates Elspeth and then defeats Elspeth's human army. Now, Polukranos rules the plane of Theros while Xenagos watches over his brother. THE END. You can rewrite that to make it flow better and make any changes you want. Hope this helps! Also I may have spelled some stuff wrong, particularly Aethreos and the city (the city is on Aegis of the Gods i think).

Dude, that was freakin awesome. I really like the idea of that storyline, and I will try as soon as possible to add that. Thanks so much for all your help, and be sure to get back to me on any other ideas you might have to help with the storyline. Also, are there any cards from khans of tarkir that you think I might need? Again, thanks heaps The_Red_Weird

Well maybe for the next part of the story line should be about Khans, and I'm not really too sure what that would be about. Maybe Polukranos will try to become a khan himself? Idk. But as for Khans cards in this deck, Sarkhan, the Dragonspeaker is looking pretty good. As for everything else, maybe if some good Temur guys come out splash blue so you can play them? Idk, both the storyline and the future cards in your deck depend on what else Khans has in store.