Just gonna give you a couple generic tips of the trade as it were. Usually you don't need more than 20ish lands, 29 is way too high. You also don't want to run one-ofs of all your cards unless this is a real deck and you don't have a lot of playset of things. If that's the case the best advice I would give you would be go either online or to your LGS and either buy playset of singles you like or buy a bunch of packs. You'll be less likely to get exactly what you want with the packs but it's a lot more fun I feel that way.

Yeah this is my real deck and I can cut down on the lands for sure was planning on likely adding a few low cost creatures in their place.

Thanks for the advice it really helps.

Just made a few edits after getting some new cards...tried to give it less of a good cards deck feel and instead theme it with warrior class smaller creatures which buff other warriors with larger more specialize creatures as heavier hitters.

Let me know what you think!