Kitchen finks the song

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Posted on Feb. 11, 2016, 5:05 p.m. by smackjack

Ive been playing around with Garage Band on my iPad all day, and this is what i came up with. Now i want to hear what people think. Its dubstep so most people probably wont like it, but anyways :).

Soundcloud link

aholder7 says... #2

i actually liked it. good on you for making something cool

February 11, 2016 5:26 p.m.

smackjack says... #3

Thanks :D

February 11, 2016 5:29 p.m.

kengiczar says... #4

@ smackjack awesome work.

About the windup at 44 seconds lasting until 52 seconds. The length is just long enough to seem like it interrupts the rhythm too much but longer than it should be for a transition I feel. You could either shorten or lengthen it but it just feels off as is. If I had to describe it in one word it would be obnoxious.

At 138-140 there is a segment of just the percussion where you could put a fill. The four loud beats by the percussion really emphasize "hey nothing is going on here".

February 11, 2016 5:37 p.m.

GreenGhost says... #5

I dug it. I'm not super into techno but this was great.

February 11, 2016 5:39 p.m.

Lightpulsar9 says... #6

Hey that's pretty good. Nice job man.

February 11, 2016 5:40 p.m.

kengiczar says... #7

I just listened to your Thalia track and I really love that one to.

February 11, 2016 5:47 p.m.

wasianpower says... #8

I dig it, but... what does this have to do with Kitchen Finks?

February 11, 2016 5:48 p.m.

smackjack says... #9

wasianpower I clicked save and the iPad asked me for a title. Kitchen Finks was laying on the table beside my iPad and hey, they are freaky small ugly beings raiding kitchens and making a mess. Seemed fitting for a dubstep song :)

Thanks everyone :). And kengiczar thanks for the input, im try what you said.

February 11, 2016 5:53 p.m.

smackjack says... #10

kengiczar I changed the windup and added a fill. Plus a new ending. link

February 11, 2016 8:15 p.m.

miracleHat says... #11

I liked the song, though I wish it had some sort of intro.

February 11, 2016 8:30 p.m.

kengiczar says... #12

I like the windup much more now. It caught me by surprise when it started.

Nice job on the 1:38-1:40 change. It sounds very nice. If you wanted you could repeat 1:36-1:39/40, the portion that lasts for 8 beats, before going onto the next 8 beat portion in 1:40-1:44.

I can tell the ending is noticeably improved just by listening. 2:10-the end is solid. The next 32 beats starting at 2:11 going through 2:18/19 are particularly sweet.

February 11, 2016 9:20 p.m.

mpeach1 says... #13

Pretty nifty. I always like seeing some MTG inspired music. There are a few metal projects with some magic references as well.

February 11, 2016 11:49 p.m.

smackjack says... #14

Heres Glimmervoid. Not very polished tho.. Soundcloud link

February 29, 2016 3:14 p.m.

smackjack says... #15

Graaawwhh This thread is a zombie coming back to life to inform you that Bitterblossom is up. This is one that i personally are pretty proud of, enjoy: Soundcloud link :)

March 21, 2016 4:18 p.m.

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