Help me Balance this, planning on building a thematic deck around it

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Posted on Oct. 27, 2015, 7:36 p.m. by Kala

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Sorry, couldn't get the link to work. Any critique of power, or ideas for flavor text are welcome, If you give me a little assistance, I can credit you in the deck I make in the future. Current changes: 3/4 to 2/4, and tap all creatures to tap or untap two target creatures.

AjMcGamer says... #2

are you looking to build for EDH/commander?

October 27, 2015 7:38 p.m.

AjMcGamer says... #3

have you thought about adding "... they dont untap during their controllers next untap step" to the tap effect? Also switching shroud to hexproof would fit more with today's creatures. I like the card idea though. I didn't realize at first you were asking for help with a custom card though lol. good job.

October 27, 2015 7:47 p.m.

FAMOUSWATERMELON says... #4

Seems a bit powerful. Not only can you not kill it, but if you play a blue spell a turn, you basically have a pseudo-Ensnaring Bridge effect that can attack and can't be killed. Maybe just make it one creature that doesn't untap during its opponent's untap step?

October 27, 2015 9:22 p.m.

magiceli says... #5

Just add one green mana, make it hexproof, change to 2/4 or 3/3

October 27, 2015 9:25 p.m.

Kala says... #6

I think I'll change it to 2/4 for now, but I like shroud because it is a disadvantage versus hexproof. Thinking about tapping one creature and it doesn't untap, but I might just keep the old mechanic.

October 27, 2015 9:33 p.m.

Kala says... #7

Maybe I could change it to whenever you cast a permanent spell?

October 27, 2015 9:34 p.m.

ABadMagicPlayer100 says... #8

Woah, that seems OP. I would change the blue spell trigger to you may tap target creature. Stopping your opponent from blocking your big creatures for casting a Treasure Cruise or the like is just too good.

October 27, 2015 9:49 p.m.

suicidalbunny says... #9

umm. i think you could have tap target creature and it doesnt untap on their next untap step. i feel like she should be a 5 drop also.

October 28, 2015 1:28 a.m.

TheNextRedDude says... #10

definitely tap then doesn't uncap 1 creature. What is the flavor supposed to be?

October 28, 2015 8:05 p.m.